I've seen through everything.
Ok, there is no doubt you are a good artist. But dont take offense that I don't like your style. It's
very abstract artish. (Sry dunno how to put it)
Even when I dont like this particular style i'll say you have gr8 skills, okay, but here are some pointers:
1.Your eyes are great! But some are deadened (has a zombielike feel), and some are disfocused....as in...
not looking at the same direction or slighly out of place.
2.Your faces tend to be very long and dragged, except for most chibis. Its not a bad thing, but sometimes
it rubs some of a particular 'feel' off
3.Kanda was very thin. Very very thin. Bony in fact. And the back-of head(hair) proportions were off by a lil.
And in allen's one too btw. But Kanda's foggy grin was a good concept. I like it.
4. Your penmanship owns mine to hell. *defeated
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5. I don't know how to say this, but all your drawings has a certain 'feel' to it. but, may I see one drawing with
the mouth open(either to eat, drink or anything. that's fine)? And I want to see something with strong emotion too.
Sadness or anger is alright. or even hate.
other than that, it's obvious you have been making your own manga characters. Is there any particular design that
is very original to you (personality-wise, hairstyle-wise, eyes-wise and clothes-wise)? If so, I would like a look.
Signing off,
a fellow artist.
