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PostSubject: Kahna   Mon Nov 10, 2008 5:32 pm

Owner: Amay Tottle

Weapon Name: Kahna

Type: Parasite

How it is activated: By her thoughts, no fancy phrases, rymes, or dance moves.

Level 1:
Description: Two thin intertwined golden chain fly out of each of her wrists, and hover around her. They are made from her innocence, which is found in her blood, due to this she cannnot use them for more than two hours with out resulting in major blood loss.
Activated: They just fly out of her wrists.
Attack:
Mad Grab- The chains have the abilitie to open portals in space and find items or people, while only being able to search over long distances, when dealing with close distance fighting they can redirect attacks by opening short range portals. She cannot bend space, only being able to replace the space with the same ammount of space. So she cannot move an elephant into a small alley with no room for it.


Level 2
Description: Small silver chimes that float below the palms of Amays hands. The chimes are in the shape of small round bells, and they two are made from her blood as well, however unlike her level one, she can keep these up for five hours with out causing blood loss, and use them for two more, however those two extra hours would cause blood loss.
Activated: She claps her hands together and when she pulls them apart they appear.
Attack :
Bam- When Amay moves her wrists the chimes send out small waves of energy that act as large bombs. The size and force of the explosions vary on her emotions, and movment.


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PostSubject: Re: Kahna   Mon Nov 10, 2008 7:53 pm

It's okay, but I'd really like more description. In your history you said her Innocence is found in her blood, so maybe you should write a little more on that here.

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PostSubject: Re: Kahna   Mon Nov 10, 2008 11:30 pm

Adding on to what Tag said...


Quote :
Description: Two thin intertwined golden chain fly out of each of her wrists, and float around her.
Activated: They just fly out of her wrists.

Ya, more info.


Quote :
Mad Grab- The chains have the abilitie to open portals in space and find items or people, while only being able to search over long distances, when dealing with close distance fighting they can redirect attacks by opening short range portals. She cannot bend space, only being able to replace the space with the same ammount of space. So she cannot move an elephant into a small alley with no room for it.

How is this offensive in any way? ANd how large is the scope, approximately?


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Bam- When Amay moves her wrists the chimes send out small waves of energy that act as large bombs.
More info
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PostSubject: Re: Kahna   Tue Nov 11, 2008 2:01 am

The weapon doesn't have to be offensive, Untainted. Look at Miranda's. Her's is completely defensive. Also... I'd appreciate it if you would stop posting in these topics. Unless you have the power to approve a character or their weapon, you should keep your comments to yourself. ... Especially when your comments are just repeating what I've already said.

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PostSubject: Re: Kahna   Tue Nov 11, 2008 4:55 am

Ok editted it.
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PostSubject: Re: Kahna   Tue Nov 11, 2008 8:15 am

*sulk*

I was suppossed to be a part-time mod....
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PostSubject: Re: Kahna   Tue Nov 11, 2008 6:30 pm

Approved. I hope her level one can work offensively as well as defensively. It might be hard to level her weapon, otherwise.

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