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PostSubject: Void Eclipse [finished]   Thu Oct 16, 2008 9:38 am

Owner - Hyoung Jeviherei

Weapon Name - Void Eclipse

Type - Parasite

Description -
The innocence rests both in her gene and her physical body. Thus when activated, her three paired of red hued wings would appear on her back. Her both hands, inscribed upon in shimmering symbols, would be covered in the spell like symbols. The shimmering symbols would change in the color of faint silver and crawl on her arm as well. These shimmering symbols takes the liking of the writing spell devised from her family and also with symbols similar to the one of a Rosetta cross formed by the innocence. The reason why she usually wears extremely long sleeves that covers her arms is to hide the innocence and to have a percentage of catching the other by surprise.

Extra Note -
While activated, the wings stay out the whole entire time. When the wings are damaged, it impairs the ability for her to fly. It may also destroy half of her innocence and the restriction chain. Although she would not fall into Ecli from becoming used to her blood, she will fall into a pained state where she will be literally helpless. Her innocence will recover naturally using the gene's power as the base as long as she does not die and the innocence embedded in her body dies as well. The wings recover rather quickly as it is a physical manipulation of her power and will recover half way within a day if the damage done isn't as severe and completely in few days if the damage done wasn't great. However it isn't safe for her to release her wings during the time and a week or so after as the power will be concentrated on the wings to 'recover' fragments of itself and she would not be able to control it. Her wings are rather easy to break. Although it cannot be broken by regular weapons, it can be broken by other innocence and such. However the fast speed it grants her and the flexibility to move it around and also by switching the order of the wings, it is quiet hard to aim for and succeed in hitting it by depending upon the naked eye. Also as long as a pair of wings is left and the innocence intact, she will be able to fight although it will be a weight to her and she will be quiet slow. However, although the wings will heal naturally fast as they rest inside of her, the innocence and Hyoung suffers more. Hyoung has the same recovery speed as a regular human's however her innocence recovers at an abnormal slow speed. While her innocence recovers, she cannot use neither the innocence nor her power. Her innocence has a tendency to be quiet slow at recovering even from normal damages and also requires time to be invoked and for it to take time for it to move on to the next level, thus cannot start from the third level and such as it must start from the first level and climb up during the battle.

-Level 1- Kagome
When activated the symbols etched on the back of her hands expand and ‘crawl’ on her arm. This is the phase in which takes the most time and when she is most vulnerable as it is the phase in which her blood changes to suit the need of letting both innocence and the gene out. Thus her speed will be slightly slower and leave her unable to move as fluently. However after these few seconds have passed, three pairs of red wings will unfold from her back, immobilizing her for a second or so until it grants her speed and flight. The gold chains will be blackened in this phase as the silver chain, innocence, will wrap even more around the wings and root itself even deeper into the wings. Silver shimmering on her skin will then reach to the wings, drawing power from it. Then two chains will extend from silver circled around between her wrist and her elbow. These chains will connect to the newly formed two rings on each finger, one on the fourth and the other on the second finger. On her right hand would be burned silver while the other would be just regular shades of silver. The chains would cross on the palm of her hand in a crooked cross shape and the colors would be the opposite of the rings. From the crossing of the chains extend another chain weaved in thin rectangle strip weaved with kagome patterns. An equilateral triangle piece of sheet metal will hand from the bottom of it, attaching a simple cross weight sharpened at the bottom. She can control these two kagome chains, extending it up to the distance of six yards. She can pierce or slice with the chains as well although it is mostly used in defensive purposes as it becomes slower as it extends from her.

Special Attack -
The kagome chains split into several skinnier chains with small cross weights upon it. In the center of the circle of the wires is a red chain with a equally hued teardrop weight on it. The smaller wires are faster then before, however it is at the same, fragile. The red wire is slower and much easier to dodge even with naked eye, although they may have a bit of a trouble. However with a single scratch or a hit with the red teardrop weight forms a symmetrical butterfly like pattern on it. Another hit on the same spot would result in a crescent moon like shape overlapping the butterfly. The third hit would result in a void black circle in the center of the overlapping figures. The fourth would result in the black circle spreading around the overlapping shapes until all shapes are black. If the fifth hit occurs in the progress of tainting of black, it does just the simple physical damage. However if done after the shapes are colored in black, poison like substance invades the body and eventually leads to death. However because of the inconvenience and the face that it is quiet difficult to even get past the second hit and the fact it is near useless unless fighting a large close distance target, she merely uses this move to distract the other while going into the second level.

-Level 2- Prayer to Ecli
In the interchange, her gold tinted silver eye becomes black and the chains retreat to form into an onyx shaded and white gold shaded blades. They have a queer shape as two parts branch from the red bandage wrapped handle. A branch follows along the arm, forming a blade along it, allowing her to strike with just her arm. Another branch forms into an extending blade between her second and third finger. On her pale would be a cross section of the chain from the Kagome form with silver much more intricate cross charm mixed with a design like spell circle. The red ribbon from the handle or the grip would extend up her arm in a snakelike crawling fashion and melt into the ring of black between her shoulder and her elbow. Upon activating this, she forms her body into a position like a dancer’s prayer, the form in which she intersects her arms above her and her pals facing frontward. Her head would be down and her eyes would be closed. The innocence then covers her whole arm in black symbol like covers, in the way destroying any layer of clothing on the arm. It grants her high offensive attacks and speed, however it not the best defense. Even so it leaves her unprotected and open for few seconds upon activation.

Special Attack –On the second form, the swords melt away from her as it then forms into double side bladed sphere like swords [A sword in which the grip is in the center of the sword and the both down and up side has curved blade on it]. Her wings also change shape into skeleton like black wings with silver and red chains, thus reflecting upon the image of Ecli.
Seven consecutive hits from these blades on the same area would send the target’s physical body in an Ecli-like state where one cannot feel, taste, see, smell, nor hear and feels as if the body has fallen into numbness. Upon using this attack, her speed increases for limited time and with each hit, the target looses a part of what they feel. This however lasts for a limited time as well. After sending the target to the Ecli-like state and upon killing the target with the blades, she falls into an exhausted state in which takes for her an hour to fully recover from. Thus in case of multiple enemies, she sends them into the Ecli-like state and then kills them all at once.

-Level 3- Eclipse
This form is not completely activated until time limit passes. When activated in the beginning, the weapons, similar to the ones from the Prayer to Ecli, form into a white blade and is slowly dispelled and withered away as she uses them. With every connection the blades make, they shatter off bits of pieces. Once both of the sword's blade has been smashed away, it is possible to smash it apart in a single blow if strong enough, the pieces of the metal that has fallen on the ground forms into a shape like silver petals. At the same time another blade is given to her in the form a blade with curved tip and the other which extends longer in the form of a regular katana blade. Two ribbon like attaches the swords together. The petals are capable of dealing light damage as it flutters around, however it cannot be controlled and although it does not damage her, it may damage an ally. As long as there are movements in the air, the petals may ride on that current and move about as if fish in water. Using the blades, Hyoung can perform an attack that focuses energy along the blade and releasing it immediately to form an ‘air slice’ like long ranged attack. The further it spreads from her, weaker it gets and it cannot change directions.

Special Attack
The attack does not differ much from the regular ‘air strike’ attack she is able to perform in this form. However once hit, a fragment of the released energy will enter and rip apart the limb from inside simply by contradicting. In a way it is like poison. Thus even if the rip was clean, it cannot be attached together as by the infection of the ‘poison’. This attack however weakens her upon success as the energy that tears apart the target is a piece of energy she cannot recover from the air.

-Critical Breaker- Void Eclipse
When reaching this form, she stays vulnerable for half a minute or so, depending only on the metal petals from Eclipse form to keep her protected. The petals form around her in a flower bud like shape, protecting her. When one side is destroyed or attacked, the petals rush to thicken and recover the area. However because it isn’t as strong, an attack that covers half or the entire side may damage it. When the time has passes, both of her eyes are in black and wires extend from her shoulder down with black teardrop like on it. It has a similar effect as in Prayer to Ecli form although it is slower in draining away the target’s senses and does not send them into a state of physical Ecli. Instead it uses those senses into energy for the special attack. At this state, she cannot kill nor move from one spot. Instead the hundreds of black wires, which cannot deal much physical damage and has the range of mere three yards, pushes the target away from her, protecting her. The petals, which can deal only a paper cut like damage, forms into a barrier like and helps along as well. All these, however can be destroyed in an attack that releases enormous energy at once and covers around half or more area.

Special Attack
This is perhaps her favorite move. Her wings are formed into two swords, the shape identical to the ones from the Prayer to Ecli. Unlike the others, this is done in an instant. The swords both, the lower and the higher blades from the grip point in the center, have silver inscribing on them. She is granted higher speed and can manipulate the petals and the wires by her will. During this stage however, she may fall into a form of illusion of Ecli, thus by not feeling anything around her, she focuses only on the target, not feeling pain nor anything. In this stage, she attacks relentlessly at the target no matter how tired nor how painful her wounds become. Although she cannot kill by the wires, it can slowly suck away at the other’s energy slowly to fuel her own. During this stage, she is capable of attacking her own ally. Only when the intended target dies does she recover her senses. As long as no extreme fatal damage was done to her body at this point, she keeps on attacking and may recover just enough for her not to die from killing the target. By killing the target, her gene uses the energy left in the target before death to help her recover. Even so this energy is just enough so that she does not die. If she chooses not to fall into the illusion of Ecli nothing changes and is almost the same as from the one falling into Ecli except that she is much slower and does less damage as she is kept to her limits by pain.


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PostSubject: Re: Void Eclipse [finished]   Thu Oct 16, 2008 9:57 am

Erp! No healin'!

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PostSubject: Re: Void Eclipse [finished]   Thu Oct 16, 2008 10:42 am

I agree to a certain extent. In DGM, the only Healer is Miranda. And, she only does so
temprarily. But maybe tat could be okay if you tweak it for side effects.... Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Void Eclipse [finished]   Thu Oct 16, 2008 11:05 am

You too, no healing, untainted.

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PostSubject: Re: Void Eclipse [finished]   Thu Oct 16, 2008 1:51 pm

Mad
I didn't get to finish it......
I was about to reword them and make them completely different, but my school computer prevented me of that.
DX
Besides it says n/f
._.
Also I meant to state that her wings 'heal' rather recover, faster then her body and the innocence.
And it got cut off from my teacher cutting off the internet.
DX

[e.d.i.t]

This is my fifth version after I kept on deleting after deleting by pressing all select and type in it by an accident...
So this may be bad and etc.
I did put some restrictions onto it, I don't know if it'll be enough though.
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PostSubject: Re: Void Eclipse [finished]   Fri Oct 17, 2008 6:12 am

When were we not allowed to have healing abilities? My character's weapon (also wings) got approved even though the feathers have a slight healing property. o.O I think you need to make a topic somewhere to list things that aren't allowed so people don't waste time writing up an awesome weapon and later find out they can't use it.
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PostSubject: Re: Void Eclipse [finished]   Fri Oct 17, 2008 7:58 am

Ever since I asked Lenalee on msn to let my new character heal faster.

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PostSubject: Re: Void Eclipse [finished]   Fri Oct 17, 2008 8:02 am

Also, the CPB is a bit too, downpowered? =/

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PostSubject: Re: Void Eclipse [finished]   Fri Oct 17, 2008 8:26 am

I thought you meant just in general, no healing abilities. I understand the "no healing super fast" one. My bad for misunderstanding you.
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PostSubject: Re: Void Eclipse [finished]   Fri Oct 17, 2008 3:05 pm

Tyki-pon wrote:
Also, the CPB is a bit too, downpowered? =/

I intended it to be like so.
^^"
Since my character's power is supposed to be restricted and it is kind of easy to play my character with overpowering, I decided to restrict a lot on her innocence.
At least as much as I could think of without making it wound too weak and such.
For the CPB, since it's 'draining' away the other's senses as using them as her own energy would be enough [although I thought it was a bit overpowered anyway...] so I just wrote it so that it would have disadvantages in exchange for it as it can exhaust or make the enemy void of senses, which would be enough advantage. But then because of this, I thought it was over powered.
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PostSubject: Re: Void Eclipse [finished]   Fri Oct 17, 2008 10:02 pm

I think its good Wink

but speaking of adverse effects, it's a little harsh in Level 2, cos its virtually impossible to
atk someone so many times in the same spot.

But its your meat you're cutting. I wont say nothing but good luck! Surprised
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PostSubject: Re: Void Eclipse [finished]   Sat Oct 18, 2008 5:16 am

This... thing is so confusing, someone else perhaps?

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PostSubject: Re: Void Eclipse [finished]   Sat Oct 18, 2008 6:06 pm

I'll approve it for now. If we see anything happening IC that seems a little... too powerful, abusive, or god-modding then we'll have to talk.
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