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PostSubject: A few edits in the story?   Wed Jul 30, 2008 9:06 am

Mind if I report the story here with some corrections? I've noticed some wrong stuff.

Edit: Here it is:

D.Gray-man is a gothic manga series by Katsura Hoshino. The story of D.Gray-man takes place on a fictional Earth at the end of the 19th century. The plot mostly centers around Allen Walker, a young boy who is a member of The Black Order; a secretive organization whose members are known as Exorcists. The Order's primary mission is to stop The Millennium Earl, an ancient being who intends to 'cleanse' the world by destroying all life on it.

Exorcists are specially chosen humans who are gifted with the ability to control and use Innocence, a divine substance created in ages past to combat the Earl. According to the Order's history, at the end of The Great Flood, 109 fragments of Innocence were scattered around the world. Once an Innocence fragment is matched to its compatible user, it can become a weapon or tool for the user to wield in the battle against the Earl.

Throughout the story, Allen is introduced to more Exorcists, including Yu Kanda, Lenalee Lee, Lavi, Miranda Lotto, and Arystar Krory. Assisting Allen and the Exorcists is a team of scientists and handlers led by Komui Lee, a Supervisor of the Black Order and Lenalee's older brother. Allen's master and mentor is the enigmatic Cross Marian, one of the five Exorcist Generals of the Black Order, who at the beginning of the story has mysteriously disappeared. In the course of completing their missions, Allen and his fellow Exorcists are introduced to the other Generals: Kevin Yeegar, Froi Tiedoll (Or Froi Theodore depending on translation), Cloud Nine, and Winters Sokaro.

The Millennium Earl is aided in his plans by The Noah Clan, humans who have inherited the genes of Noah himself. Each member of this clan is gifted with great power and each represents a different 'aspect' of Noah. They are identified by their gray skin and line of cross-shaped stigmata on their foreheads. As the story progresses, the members of the clan are revealed: Road Kamelot (The Dreams of Noah), Tyki Mikk (The Pleasure of Noah), Jasdero and David - Jasdebi (The Bonds of Noah), Skin Boric (The Wrath of Noah), and Lulubell (The Form of Noah).

The Earl also utilizes an army of demonic creatures called Akuma to do his bidding. Akuma are created by taking advantage of someone's grief over the death of a loved one. The Earl tricks individuals into bringing their loved one back to life through a skeletal 'doll,' only to have that doll kill them and turn them into an Akuma with the soul of the dead loved one trapped inside. Akuma are able to evolve and with each new level grow more intelligent, powerful, and sadistic. Since Akuma can impersonate humans to blend in with people, Exorcists are routinely assigned to track down and eliminate them. Allen is the only exorcist able to actually see past an Akuma's disguise, this is because of a curse placed on him. The evolutions of Akuma are Level 1: which is the standard and start form of all Akuma; Level 2: Akuma gains a personality and a will of it's own and awakens it's abilities; Level 3: Akuma becomes a murderous being, wearing an impenetrable armor and awakens even more of its abilities. Currently, the highest and most powerful Akuma the exorcists face is a Level 4, which is extremely powerful and almost invincible, giving even the generals a difficult time.

Changes: Lulubell is the Form of Noah, not the Lust, as stated in the wiki:

Lulu Bell represents the "Form" of Noah with the power to shapeshift. This was originally mistranslated by scanlators as "Lust", which uses the same kanji as "Form"--also slang for something desirable or erotic, hence "Lust".
Source: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tyki_Mikk#Tyki_Mikk

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It's another translation error, it's David in english even though people say Debitto.

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They inherited Noah's Genes, are not descendants, the proof of this is that Skin Boric was not a Noah from the start, when he was a man, he inherited the Genes.

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The forehead stigmata are not symbols, but stigmata.

And that was pretty much it.

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PostSubject: Re: A few edits in the story?   Wed Jul 30, 2008 9:12 am

Hmmm, really? Tell me about them, then! ^^
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PostSubject: Re: A few edits in the story?   Wed Jul 30, 2008 9:21 am

I've edited a new story with the 4 edits I've made.

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PostSubject: Re: A few edits in the story?   Wed Jul 30, 2008 9:29 am

Very well, I'll edit it. Thanks for the info and for saving me the work~!
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PostSubject: Re: A few edits in the story?   Wed Jul 30, 2008 12:38 pm

Doesn't matter. I do all sorts of wierd stuff while being bored.

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PostSubject: Re: A few edits in the story?   Wed Jul 30, 2008 1:24 pm

Well...when I'm bored I usually do weird stuff too, but definitely not text editing. For example today I was holding a Viking film marathon...I love Vikings~! ^^"
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PostSubject: Re: A few edits in the story?   Wed Jul 30, 2008 1:25 pm

Marlow wrote:
Well...when I'm bored I usually do weird stuff too, but definitely not text editing. For example today I was holding a Viking film marathon...I love Vikings~! ^^"

I watch Tyki AMVs, I love Tyki-pon~!

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PostSubject: Re: A few edits in the story?   Wed Jul 30, 2008 1:29 pm

Tomorrow comes the Zombeh marathon. Resident Evil films, Zombie manga and Undead slaying on Dragonfabe...*sigh*...hooray... =____="
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